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Start your free trialMichael Cronk
8,970 PointsI did the project, I just feel like there is too much code. What is your opinion? Too much? It works perfectly.
SERVICE_CHARGE = 2
TICKET_PRICE = 10
tickets_remaining = 100
def service_charge_func(num_of_tickets):
return (num_of_tickets * TICKET_PRICE) + SERVICE_CHARGE
while tickets_remaining >= 1:
users_name = input("What is your name? ")
if tickets_remaining >= 1:
print("There are {} tickets left...".format(str(tickets_remaining)))
else:
print("We have sold out of tickets, we're sorry for the inconvenience, {}".format(users_name.capitalize()))
try:
ticket_amount = int(input("How many tickets would you like, {}? ".format(users_name.capitalize())))
if ticket_amount < 1:
raise ValueError(print("Your ticket amount has to be more than 0 and less than 101."))
elif ticket_amount > 100:
raise ValueError(print("Your ticket amount has to be more than 0 and less than 101."))
elif ticket_amount > tickets_remaining:
raise ValueError(print("There are only {} tickets remaining.".format(tickets_remaining)))
except ValueError:
print("What you entered is invalid... Please enter a whole number.")
else:
total_amount = service_charge_func(ticket_amount)
print("Your sub-total is ${}".format(total_amount))
proceed = input("Would you like to proceed? Y/N ")
if proceed.lower() == "y":
# Gather payment information
print("SOLD!")
tickets_remaining -= ticket_amount
elif proceed.lower() == "yes":
# Gather payment information
print("SOLD!")
tickets_remaining -= ticket_amount
elif proceed != str:
print("What you entered is invalid... Please try again.")
else:
print("Okay, thank you for your time {}...".format(users_name.capitalize()))
else:
print("All the tickets are sold out...")
2 Answers
Steven Parker
231,275 PointsOne compacting technique you could use is to combine similar tests to avoid repeated code lines:
if proceed.lower() == "yes" or proceed.lower() == "y":
And when posting code to the forum, use Markdown formatting to preserve the appearance, or share the entire workspace by making a snapshot and posting the link to it.
Michael Cronk
8,970 PointsI did that and already i reduced my code by 6 lines. Also thanks for telling me about the markdown format! Thank you!
Paul Kim
1,966 Pointshm Im still new and was curious what your code would look like.. I think you don't need the elif ticket_amount > 100 part because you're pretty much already saying that by saying elif ticket_amount > tickets_remaining..
Michael Cronk
8,970 PointsMichael Cronk
8,970 PointsI don't know why the code posts like this, IDK how to fix it.